Breast Cancer Infographic

Hi all, my name is Aaron Bhurji and i am a student at Birmingham City University, i am in my final year and 7 weeks away from graduating. I study visual communication and i have created a video in regards to breast cancer. The target audience is ladies over the age of 50. It would be greatly appreciated if i could receive some feedback on this video from ladies aged 50 and over. What are your opinions? Would you change anything? If so what?

The video is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_67WhuymG0c

Thank You!

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Can you slow it down a little the pages was turning before i could finish reading them .

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Hi Aaron, I agree with Eliza about speed .

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Hmm slightly quick but apart from that its clear and gives the figures we need.

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I agree that slowing it down a bit is a good idea. Also I'm a bit puzzled on the page which says that 70% of those diagnosed through screening have successful breast conserving treatment. Why are there 13 figures with 9 indicated as ok? Why not a simpler 10 with 7 ok?
I think I might pause longer on each page, but perhaps even more so on the last but one, with the statistics on it.

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Aaron may I also suggest that the target audience should be women aged 47 and over as I understand that mammograms are to be offered to that age group shortly .

Most women over 50 will already have been offered/had the test so will be more aware of the availability

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I think he's gone. . . .

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I would suggest that men are included in your quest.