apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

apologies ( with picture of how sorry ) 24.02.18


this is not a admission

its to display etiquette

got a life long condition

its no excuse and certainly not adequate.

to stop the deterioration

news is the fixation

metro wrightstuff sky or lbc station

all guilty of inspiring a creation.

love to dissect

or to praise with power

often writing that some won't detect

feelings and emotions open any flower.

not any line

the filter is busted

deliberately controversial will never decline

its a style that is tried and trusted.

going to try gentle

but can not do microscopic

to take on the big players is mental

confused poetry won't lead to no biopic.



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Re: apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

You've no need to be sorry. I like your poetry.

Re: apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

Why you are sorry, I have no notion
But you don't need the News
To cause a Commotion
It's Topical to choose that road
But it's lyrical
To think Commode.

Re: apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

I always read your threads, don't always understand them but, I don't understand much these days. I do try though!
Don't worry about it, do your own thing

Re: apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

Never stop, I'm not a fan of poetry but yours intrigues me and I usually try to make a comment because your topics are interesting. So don't stop posting but do stop apologising.

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Don't stop, I like your poetry too much.

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wow - you lot have made my day. thank you so much for all your loverly comments and you have made me feel on top of the world.

really am grateful and I am buzzing people read and try and understand me.

you no what - a thank you poem is brewing to you five. tick tock.

Re: apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

I never miss a poem!

Your work is funny, inisightful, sometimes caustic, sometimes delightfully obtuse, and very sharp off the mark. A good poet gives his reader reason to pause. Never be obvious - or apologize about your art.. .

Carry on!

Re: apologies ( with picture of how sorry )

Make that six

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exclusive for over50s forum 25.02.18
　
thank you to the five
it is a boost
not skeptical if feeling the drive
on over 50s is where i lay and roost.
julie1962 is first to receive
to you its a exclusive
thank you for what i did retrieve
a good feeling is conclusive.
its going to be tricky for ffosse
but determined to score
inspiring me mourino jose
louder then wembley was your roar.
not any fear
a thank you is sending
special words from leia
this oldfool is befriending.
starting to split
infarct its late and does tire
but giving me needed grit
flying thanks to spitfire.
last investment
this is not "guess who" and a guesser
trust me with this testament
gratitude to you tessa.
ended and not feeling glum
copyed up and ready to post
then delightful from surfermom
got a beer in hand and will toast.
going to charge like a rino
has to be included in my mix
flowers sent to ruthio
so happy you are number six.