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17-05-2018, 12:09 PM
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do i wish i was creative a poem by steved reply 17.05.18
 
welcome to mayhem
here is no repression
broad not at stem
not re-created but a obsession.
at you origin is power
showing your courageous
your camera will ensure you flower
being so creative is never outrageous.
i imagine you are devious
for i am a sinner
every single act and you label mischievous
is poetry a true reflection from inner.
do not do precious
for room this is not sparring
in bold i send to you audacious
what you are doing is extremely daring.
are you looking at delicious
on myself would not be so kind
steved all about you is conspicuous
your repression in poetry is not blind.
 
my poem was created by reading this master peace by steved.


do i wish i was creative by steved on allpoetry
Do I wish I was creative,
A fanciful mind, broad and courageous,
Rejecting repressed thoughts to be re-creative.

My poetry would be bold and originative
maybe totally and utterly outrageous,
Do I wish I was creative

Puckish, but first and foremost imaginative
with no excuses in being ostentatious,
Rejecting repressed thoughts to be re-creative.

Maybe my poetry would be tender and expressive
able to shed a tear, a smile and audacious,
Do I wish I was creative.

A creative mind, envied and addictive,
Beautifully exciting and ever conspicuous,
rejecting repressed thoughts to be re-creative,
Do I wish I was creative.


sweetie - I might need you to have a word with this steved
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17-05-2018, 12:33 PM
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Re: do i wish i was creative a poem by steved reply

My oh my, some poems make me cry
Others take me to a place, where I can only sigh
Each poet has a style, that many strive to get
But others have potential, they may not know it yet
The poetry of love, is my favourite, that's for sure
Those poems are a way to woo, they open every door
So embrace those who are writing, a verse for all to read
It fills a need for someone, or a way to say take heed
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17-05-2018, 01:30 PM
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Re: do i wish i was creative a poem by steved reply

Originally Posted by Sweetie pie ->
My oh my, some poems make me cry
Others take me to a place, where I can only sigh
Each poet has a style, that many strive to get
But others have potential, they may not know it yet
The poetry of love, is my favourite, that's for sure
Those poems are a way to woo, they open every door
So embrace those who are writing, a verse for all to read
It fills a need for someone, or a way to say take heed
has some promise - keep trying!
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17-05-2018, 11:14 PM
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Re: do i wish i was creative a poem by steved reply

gumbud - shuch - that was excellent and I loved it sweetie.

sweetie I want you to heed this message - I loved that poem and I thank you. night night.
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17-05-2018, 11:23 PM
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Re: do i wish i was creative a poem by steved reply

Originally Posted by oldfool ->
gumbud - shuch - that was excellent and I loved it sweetie.

sweetie I want you to heed this message - I loved that poem and I thank you. night night.
Take no notice of Gumbud, he is a special friend. He IS a brilliant poet, and has a right to push me.
Good Night to all poets and oldfool's.
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