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denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

denise i prey for your peace (metro news) 09.01.18




you won't get to read

because this won't leave you distraught

a voice in my head is the need

pain i got for your self blaming report.

it is terrible

no one can comprehend

metro news was undeniable

but you feeling guilty i have to defend.

i prey you have peace

and in your head are new frames

james suffered but so has denise

categorically no sain person blames.

god will reunite

denise and james one day will meet

your a good lady so confirmed is the invite

prey for peace before mum and son meet.



http://metro.co.uk/2018/01/07/james-...years-7209584/ - denise is going through a living hell and i prey for her peace and that is the aim behind my poem as it was heart breaking reading this in metro. how i wish denise was shown all the support for her to help her get through the dark days.
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09-01-2018, 12:15 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

Originally Posted by oldfool ->
denise i prey for your peace (metro news) 09.01.18




you won't get to read

because this won't leave you distraught

a voice in my head is the need

pain i got for your self blaming report.

it is terrible

no one can comprehend

metro news was undeniable

but you feeling guilty i have to defend.

i prey you have peace

and in your head are new frames

james suffered but so has denise

categorically no sain person blames.

god will reunite

denise and james one day will meet

your a good lady so confirmed is the invite

prey for peace before mum and son meet.



http://metro.co.uk/2018/01/07/james-...years-7209584/ - denise is going through a living hell and i prey for her peace and that is the aim behind my poem as it was heart breaking reading this in metro. how i wish denise was shown all the support for her to help her get through the dark days.
The word is PRAY, not PREY!
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09-01-2018, 12:26 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

Link won't work for me so I've no idea who Denise is ?
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09-01-2018, 12:32 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

try this link - ps I am the spell master ! https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/528523...ompson-murder/
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09-01-2018, 05:14 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

Originally Posted by tarantula ->
the word is pray, not prey!
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09-01-2018, 05:50 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

Originally Posted by oldfool ->
try this link - ps I am the spell master ! https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/528523...ompson-murder/
Thank you, poor woman that must make her feel badly but I don't think she feel she was at fault at the end of the day those boys were at fault not her. I hope she can find peace somehow but I doubt it will be in this life.
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09-01-2018, 09:47 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

I guessed it was about Denise and James Bulger.

That was after, I thought it might be about Denise Van Hooten who has recently, been talking about her little girl.
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09-01-2018, 10:22 PM
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Re: denise i prey for your peace (metro news)

I should have guessed I suppose but I like to be really sure before commenting hence I asked. I do find commenting on spelling a bit unnessesary I think the lady being commented about would think that's least of her problems a silly spelling error.
 

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