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09-01-2018, 12:08 AM
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Re: What do you think? Be honest, I won't mind!

Originally Posted by Longdogs ->
Deb W

To me, that is the correct type of poetry. I'm not keen on the stuff that doesn't rhyme (just my opinion).

I loved it.


Debbie, I agree with Dongle (Longdogs). I enjoyed your poem too. Well done.
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I did a few Sagas on another forum, I might just resurrect them, with a new cast
Erm yes, something about a jockey's nostril? Was that you?
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Yep one of many on different forums
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Well you know me ... I love any weird, wacky and wonderful thread.
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Originally Posted by Morticia ->
Seriously, credit where it's due.
I never thought you'd finish your book Rehab or that you'd stick with it to The End.
Surely that's a cliff hanger ending if I ever read one. I'm glad you warned us though as I tend to skip read but also hate short stories.

I've thought of a fantastic first line to compliment your The End ..
How about ...
"In the beginning was the word",

You might have to acknowledge some obscure guy called John if you use it.








Aaah, would that be JOHN chapter 1 verse 1.

also 3.16
 
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