27-03-2014, 02:27 PM
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Re: Night Master
Originally Posted by Rachel
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Do you need 'if need/s be' ?'if she made the effort she could turn heads'
couldn't she
In fact, looking at it further (and Googling it) 'needs be' is fine.
27-03-2014, 06:22 PM
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Re: Night Master
I think it's good solid Mills & Boon stuff, loved by millions of women and despised by most men, depending on their persuasion. My missus used to love all that type of thing, some women read this and are transported into some magical wonderland where every man is a millionaire with a body like Adonis in a lioncloth, it's all harmless escapism and if one can make a living out of churning it out why not.27-03-2014, 06:26 PM
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Re: Night Master
Originally Posted by Rachel
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Do you need 'if need/s be' ?'if she made the effort she could turn heads'
couldn't she
27-03-2014, 06:43 PM
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Re: Night Master
Originally Posted by MKJ
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Nah, there shouldn't be s at the end - taken it off now - but the sentence don't look or sound right without 'need be'. Tis like writing a poem innit - has to flow.In fact, looking at it further (and Googling it) 'needs be' is fine.
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