Re: My New Novel!
Originally Posted by
MKJ
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No superpowers from the spider bite?
Apart from the lack of the above you do have a cracking story line. I do have one concern with the plot though and that is: why did she get sent to a mental hospital after suffering from a spider bite? Not sure that is normal care procedure is it? Was it a special brain affecting spider bite?
Needs work
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Der ?
Obviously she had problems as a child and went totally bonkers when puberty hit.
Venomous bites may cause all manner of ailments, including 'super heroism' ... it's up to the author to decide how factual their novel will be.
Hospitalisation (long overdue) highlighted that she was suffering from a number of unaddressed psychological problems.
'Twas only a fleeting idea as I showered but I could envisage some in depth analysis and each aspect, milestone, in her life might be a book in itself.
thank you