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On his trail!

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Mags

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South West UK

Joined: Aug 2009

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24-01-2014, 12:39 AM

Re: On his trail!

Has all that popcorn given you this inspiration Mark?

MKJ

Chatterbox

Joined: May 2013

Posts: 8,320

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24-01-2014, 12:41 AM

Re: On his trail!

Originally Posted by Meg ->

.. cold tea springs to mind more than warm honey

Not exactly Dylan Thomas is it, more Thomas the tank engine

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I expect a little more finesse from a romantic Welshman with with the valleys in his blood...

Consider me as Dylan Thomas on steroids - a far more masculine version. This is required these days and is more in tune to the likes of the masses - car chases - unarmed combat and so on. Dylan had his time but now the usurper MKJ is ready to take the Welsh literary crown

Meg

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Worcestershire

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24-01-2014, 12:52 AM

Re: On his trail!

Originally Posted by MKJ ->

A vision of DT on steroids is too terrible for me to contemplate

I shall retire to think deep thoughts...

MKJ

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Posts: 8,320

24-01-2014, 12:52 AM

Re: On his trail!

Originally Posted by Mags ->

Has all that popcorn given you this inspiration Mark?

I think the popcorn is in the clear but the chocolate and vodka def have some part to play.

MKJ

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24-01-2014, 11:12 AM

Re: On his trail!

Hey, it ain't bad even in the light of day, though I did have to edit it a little

Janela

Fondly Remembered

Essex UK

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24-01-2014, 11:26 AM

Re: On his trail!

I thought it was a cowboy book

I imagined your man leaning on the bar, with his foot resting on the spittoon .....

MKJ

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Joined: May 2013

Posts: 8,320

24-01-2014, 01:06 PM

Re: On his trail!

Originally Posted by Janela ->

I thought it was a cowboy book

I imagined your man leaning on the bar, with his foot resting on the spittoon .....

Nah, private eye mun

Rachel

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24-01-2014, 02:00 PM

Re: On his trail!

Originally Posted by MKJ ->

Hey, it ain't bad even in the light of day, though I did have to edit it a little

Totally confused so far

You will have to write another few chapters before I get the gist of it

MKJ

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24-01-2014, 06:14 PM

Re: On his trail!

I think I will have to rewrite parts of it, especially the smelling part, but then again maybe the 'floozy' had had some sort of liaison and still stank? The thick plottens