Re: A couple of Haiku.
Well done Tabs. It's a long time since I had a go at Haiku.
I'll tell you this; it's harder than rhyming couplets.
One of the chaps at work used to do it and several of us had a go whilst we were chained to the control desk for ten or twelve hours. You would read the handover notes at the front of the log book, then find scribblings and end results in the back, added to on a daily basis.
It made a change from solving crossword clues over the headsets.