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05-07-2021, 09:51 AM
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Re: Storm - a Haiku.

Originally Posted by Silver Tabby ->
You are most welcome.



A lovely counterpoint to mine! Thank you.


Being pedantic though -
verse one - lines 2 & 3 - too many syllables.
Verse two - line 1 - not enough syllables
line 3 - too many.

Should be 5, 7, 5.
ok bwoss, I buggered up, in my defence I'm at work and didn't have time to think it out haha.
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05-07-2021, 10:04 AM
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Re: Storm - a Haiku.

Originally Posted by Lion Queen ->
ok bwoss, I buggered up, in my defence I'm at work and didn't have time to think it out haha.
Well - if you are going to use four letter words like 'work' - I am off to hide in the Craft Room!
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05-07-2021, 10:07 AM
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Re: Storm - a Haiku.

Originally Posted by Silver Tabby ->
Well - if you are going to use four letter words like 'work' - I am off to hide in the Craft Room!
I know, terrible profanity isn't it, I'll be getting booted if I'm not careful hehe. Wish I could hide in my craft room, guess I'll have to wait till tonight *tut*

Happy crafting lady
 
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