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26-02-2013, 03:21 PM
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Re: Poetry

Originally Posted by Pats CG ->
O'h no ! Little mice never did anyone harm.....
I know both of my children are such animal lovers (always rescuing sheep, hedgehogs, baby birds and have even helped roll a seal back into the sea!) I don't think they'd have liked that one!

Originally Posted by Jem ->
I never heard those before Karen, I'll have to learn some new one's now with this new grandson coming along, thanks for posting them.
You're very welcome Jem - it's nice to share these things and try to keep old-fashioned things alive. Lucky you having a new grandchild on the way - I do miss those times (and the times when mine were little) - such fun.

I shall see if I can rattle the old brain cells and see what else comes back into my memory.
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26-02-2013, 05:34 PM
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Re: Poetry

Originally Posted by Jem ->
Excellent work Arthur, I enjoyed that, very creative.
I never heard those before Karen, I'll have to learn some new one's now with this new grandson coming along, thanks for posting them.

Not excellent Jem, very poor English, I used poetic licence to put in ate instead of eaten, to make it rhyme.
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26-02-2013, 05:43 PM
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Re: Poetry

You could have written "I seem to be one of the foods that they hate"
or
"She won't eat me quickly, I'll have a long wait"
or
"I'll still be uneaten when dinner grows late."

Lots of choices!
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26-02-2013, 05:46 PM
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Karen - your kiddies sound like 'little Pats' !
 
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