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22-10-2020, 09:40 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by Mags ->
The suspense was growing with every line of your post, Tess!

Even my mouth was watering towards to end...

I'll "button up" now!
Mags, l felt the same as you when reading the opening piece. It was a very captivating, clever piece of writing.

TessA, I am very impressed and l didn’t want it to end.
I read it quickly but fully as l wanted to get to know what this intriguing bag of mystery was.

I also thought when l read ‘buttons’ that it would be chocolate ones!!
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22-10-2020, 09:54 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by Artangel ->
Mags, l felt the same as you when reading the opening piece. It was a very captivating, clever piece of writing.

TessA, I am very impressed and l didn’t want it to end.
I read it quickly but fully as l wanted to get to know what this intriguing bag of mystery was.

I also thought when l read ‘buttons’ that it would be chocolate ones!!
I think Tess would be great at writing thrillers, Art

What a great way to start a story!
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22-10-2020, 10:44 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Thanks chums! I did do a creative writing course once, that's as far as I got.

This'll make you laugh, I'm joining an Improv group, my friend runs one in Spain, he's going to give on-line lessons. It look like fun!
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23-10-2020, 01:35 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by mart ->
That's because you're a 'stud' LD.

Studs are good in an emergency.
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23-10-2020, 01:56 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by Longdogs ->
Studs are good in an emergency.
I have a box of them too, sadly unattractive metal ones
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23-10-2020, 02:24 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by Mags ->
The suspense was growing with every line of your post, Tess!

Even my mouth was watering towards to end...

I'll "button up" now!
Me too Mags! As I read towards the end of Tess's very humourous post, I was drooling as I thought ... what did she choose? was it chocolate sweets? toffees, dolly mixtures, Bassat's Allsorts? Now I have a yearning for a bag of Maltesers!!
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23-10-2020, 03:03 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by TessA ->
I have a box of them too, sadly unattractive metal ones

I feel sorry for them now.
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25-10-2020, 05:17 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

Originally Posted by Longdogs ->
Studs are good in an emergency.
I'll say, but much too scarce nowadays.
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27-10-2020, 02:25 PM
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Re: I Gave in to Temptation! Is there any hope for me?

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I'll say, but much too scarce nowadays.
I agree there are not many left now.
 
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