14-02-2019, 11:41 AM
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Is that it? How perfect! How convenient!Wow, she was instantly cured of her addiction, didn’t get arrested and go to prison.
Didn’t seem to have pay back her lodger, the £1,500 rental deposit he lent her and she gambled away.
Paid off the loan shark, £14,000 out of the money that should have been divided with her friends.
Didn’t give back the coat she ‘borrowed’ from the woman she cleaned for.
Was able to start a company and go straight into business.
Yeah, it’s just like that in real life...not!
14-02-2019, 12:23 PM
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Well that was such an anti-climax!..I've got to agree with you Arty, if it was that easy to kick the gambling habit there wouldn't be any addicts....
The last episode did seem rather rushed as well, did the writer glance at his watch and think 'Blimey I'll be late for my proper job!' [emptying bins down the old Kent Road]...
So they are all going to be cleaners are they.....Working in offices that contain sensitive information, and then make money by stealing the information......Good luck with that one...I doubt that I will be following their progress....
14-02-2019, 01:27 PM
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Crap Crap Crap Crap and Yet More Crap...Complete utter tosh.
If there is another series count me OUT!
The really really annoying thing is my sister gave it up half way through the first episode so she'll be crowing!
The other really really REALLY annoying thing is that there were sparks of real tension and excitement...here and there
15-02-2019, 08:57 PM
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Originally Posted by OldGreyFox
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Well that was such an anti-climax!..I've got to agree with you Arty, if it was that easy to kick the gambling habit there wouldn't be any addicts....
The last episode did seem rather rushed as well, did the writer glance at his watch and think 'Blimey I'll be late for my proper job!' [emptying bins down the old Kent Road]...
So they are all going to be cleaners are they.....Working in offices that contain sensitive information, and then make money by stealing the information......Good luck with that one...I doubt that I will be following their progress....
15-02-2019, 10:05 PM
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Originally Posted by Longdogs
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The writer (Mark Marlow) is a 'newcomer' to screenwriting. Do you think it showed?
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