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22-12-2009, 09:28 PM
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I Broke My Hand

A relatively short poem, this. Despite it's brevity, I think it describes everything that happened in a concise and informative way. And, although it lacks any symbolism or imagery, its sparseness indicates the loss to which I was at to explain the incident fully, and is remarkably reminiscent of the quirky style to which Mr Coleridge reverted shortly after his death.

I hope you like it.



I broke my hand
I did
But I don't know how
I did
It

The End

I thank you
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22-12-2009, 09:50 PM
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Encore,encore...funky you are mad)
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22-12-2009, 09:53 PM
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Originally Posted by chinadoll ->
Encore,encore...funky you are mad)
It has been muted but I can't think, for the life of me, why?
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22-12-2009, 10:08 PM
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What a masterpiece!
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Re: I Broke My Hand

Which bottle have you opened tonight FF?
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22-12-2009, 11:29 PM
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Re: I Broke My Hand

Originally Posted by Mags ->
Which bottle have you opened tonight FF?
I haven't Mags, that's the frightening thing. I'm teetotal during the week and only have a couple of pints over the weekend.

Let's just put it down to a mis-spent yoof, shall we?
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22-12-2009, 11:47 PM
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Bravo

Lol he's a nutta aint he?
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Mad = CRAZY..... Right? Not upset?
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23-12-2009, 01:24 AM
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Re: I Broke My Hand

Originally Posted by Jamies Dachshunds ->
Mad = CRAZY..... Right? Not upset?
Yep crazy lol Funny old language ain't it!

Oi!!!!! Why am I answering this? Now I am really mad!
 
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