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Deb W

To me, that is the correct type of poetry. I'm not keen on the stuff that doesn't rhyme (just my opinion).

I loved it.
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08-01-2018, 02:58 PM
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Applause......more please ..made me laugh because it's so true...
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08-01-2018, 03:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Sweetie pie ->
I love it.
I have a poetry thread - Can we have more, please.

Where is the thread please?
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08-01-2018, 04:06 PM
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Where is the thread please?
It's on the Home Page under 'Other leisure activities'
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08-01-2018, 11:34 PM
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I don’t know yet, But I have filled in all the page numbers
That's great start ! Keep us informed.
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08-01-2018, 11:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Puddle Duck ->
That's great start ! Keep us informed.
Thank you for your positive review of my new book, I was expecting readers to be critical of my work, your review has given me confidence to move forward, so much so that on the last page I have written, The End, which is quite incisive and to the point. Thank you for responding, who knows you could be on the page where I list acknowledgements
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08-01-2018, 11:57 PM
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Oh heavens, now what you have done Mort & Puddles. . .

Are we all going to be featured in this book Rehab?
I'm sure Dongles would draw the illustrations for you, he's very good at art.
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09-01-2018, 12:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Rehab44 ->
Thank you for your positive review of my new book, I was expecting readers to be critical of my work, your review has given me confidence to move forward, so much so that on the last page I have written, The End, which is quite incisive and to the point. Thank you for responding, who knows you could be on the page where I list acknowledgements
Seriously, credit where it's due.
I never thought you'd finish your book Rehab or that you'd stick with it to The End.
Surely that's a cliff hanger ending if I ever read one. I'm glad you warned us though as I tend to skip read but also hate short stories.

I've thought of a fantastic first line to compliment your The End ..
How about ...
"In the beginning was the word",

You might have to acknowledge some obscure guy called John if you use it.
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09-01-2018, 12:06 AM
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We have a few talented members who have posted their own poems on the forums, Robert Junior who has posted well over 200 of his poems and Gumbud being just two of them.

It's always good to see the talents of other members, be it art, photography, card making etc. Well done to you all!
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I did a few Sagas on another forum, I might just resurrect them, with a new cast
 
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