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20-03-2015, 02:25 PM
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Another of my poems.

IF ONLY.


She wandered past the station,
Her small dog by her side.
A pastie in her worn out hands,
which she tried hard to hide.

Her torn red coat was filthy.
Her dirty hands were cold.
She sat down on the pavement,
feeling sad and oh so old.

She use to be a lady.
But now she is a tramp.
Who made her bed in boxes.
Smelly cold and damp.

What caused them both to quarrel?
Why did they choose to part?
When once he was her husband.
The great love of her heart.

If she could just say sorry,
For all the things she said.
Then she could be back home with him,
and in her nice warm bed.
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20-03-2015, 06:32 PM
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Re: Another of my poems.

Very nice Maursey, it touches the heart, sad when love goes wrong.
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20-03-2015, 07:13 PM
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Re: Another of my poems.

A great poem Maursey, i like poem's with a story line
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20-03-2015, 07:19 PM
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Re: Another of my poems.

I guess you should think twice about arguing

Enjoyed that poem, even if it was sad.
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20-03-2015, 08:03 PM
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Maunsey, you have been hiding your talent, more please.



You are the perfect antidote to attention seekers & boring old farts like me
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20-03-2015, 09:52 PM
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Re: Another of my poems.

Thank you so much. So pleased you liked it.
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21-03-2015, 04:28 AM
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That's better. See the difference?
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21-03-2015, 10:25 AM
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Bruce, link doesn't work.

Where have you been?
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21-03-2015, 10:36 AM
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Originally Posted by Robert Junior ->
Bruce, link doesn't work.

Where have you been?
Ah I see why - the thread has been moved into Games and Quizzes where it should have been. For some reason I can't edit the other message to correct the link.

I haven't been anywhere; well not quite true, I have been in Thailand, Singapore and Malaysia, but I have been posting when I have access to wifi. Back in Oz at Easter.

At the moment I am in a town called Jitra in the northern part of peninsula Malaysia near the Thai border.
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21-03-2015, 11:15 AM
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Originally Posted by Robert Junior ->
Bruce, link doesn't work.

Where have you been?
Good to read that you are well Bruce
 



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