Re: Limericks. (New).

There was a young lady from Devon
Who looked like an angel from heaven

Re: Limericks. (New).

There was a young lady from Devon
Who looked like an angel from heaven
But it was only a disguise

Re: Limericks. (New).

There was a young lady from Devon
Who looked like an angel from heaven
But it was only a disguise
You could tell by her eyes

Re: Limericks. (New).

There was a young lady from Devon
Who looked like an angel from heaven
But it was only a disguise
You could tell by her eyes
And she made up a group of seven.



But these ladies were hatching a plan

Re: Limericks. (New).

But these ladies were hatching a plan
About how they could catch a man

Re: Limericks. (New).

But these ladies were hatching a plan
About how they could catch a man
I could make a wish as long as he's Rich

Re: Limericks. (New).

I'm afraid I agree, EZ, adn it makes it very difficult for the next person to follow on.
It is all explained in the OP as you say.




*Sorry Dianne, I'm not picking on you, but you have doubled the syllables needed (only 5) in your last line again, and it makes it difficult for the next person.

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But these ladies were hatching a plan
About how they could catch a man
I could make a wish as long as he's Rich
My plan was going without a hitch

Re: Limericks. (New).

But these ladies were hatching a plan
About how they could catch a man
I could make a wish as long as he's Rich
My plan was going without a hitch
but this is getting out of hand!


So back to the basics we go

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So back to the basics we go
'Bout how a limerick should flow