05-05-2013, 11:39 PM
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Re: Roberts poems (part 1)
The day draws slowly to a closeMy eyes grow heavy and tired
It seems just now ,from sleep I rose
Full of ambition fully fired
Lots to do, but I get distracted
By endless stimulations
Things my mind manufactured
Like cerebral perforations
I didn’t do half of the things I planned
It often happens this way
AS I drift off into sleepy land
I think “Tomorrows another day”
07-05-2013, 08:47 AM
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Re: Roberts poems (part 1)
Three syllables.......Woke up late
After eight
not the mints
But succinct
All the same
It’s a game
Life that is
Piece off piss
Some good days
Do amaze
Others stink
S’wot I think
Anyway
Lets make hay
While sun shines
No more whines
Give best shot
thats my lot
Bring it on
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07-05-2013, 07:35 PM
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Re: Roberts poems (part 1)
Originally Posted by Robert Junior
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Three syllables.......Woke up late
After eight
not the mints
But succinct
All the same
It’s a game
Life that is
Piece off piss
Some good days
Do amaze
Others stink
S’wot I think
Anyway
Lets make hay
While sun shines
No more whines
Give best shot
thats my lot
Bring it on
07-05-2013, 07:56 PM
118
Re: Roberts poems (part 1)
Originally Posted by mindbender
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is this the new hampshire haiku style?
Hardly Happens Here Historically.
08-05-2013, 12:15 AM
120
Re: Roberts poems (part 1)
Originally Posted by spitfire
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Seems you have capitalised on this response.
lower case
has it's place
I prefer
a wider
type of style
takes a while
now I do
yon haiku
quite a lot
they hit spot
they are fine
borderline
quality
but that's me
have a go
you wont know
if you're good
understood
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