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My knees hurt too








................unfinished rhyme
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My knees hurt too








................unfinished rhyme
Nicely understated RJ



Ooooops ... think we've highjacked your thread somewhat !
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Originally Posted by MKJ ->
My Knee Hurts

My knee hurts, my knee hurts
Godamn it my knee hurts - it hurts
Let me tell you - it damn well hurts
So there you go - my bloody knee hurts

Wroted this to compliment Gumbuds 'down in the dumps' poems. He ain't the only one suffering. Kinda rhymes too .
Slightly repetitious, if you don't mind my saying so

This is constructive criticism
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26-12-2014, 10:46 PM
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Best of the Festive Season?

Another year has come a closed
Where did it all go too?
I meant to do so many things
My ‘bucket list’ just grew

Some say we’re on this planet
To work our own s..t out
I wonder how much I shovelled
Before the snow was out?

We said farewell to chosen few
Did we leave behind or gone ahead?
Iit’s hard to make new friends
With under 30’s still not bred!

And now challenges of New Year
It won’t be new for long
There’ll be those who missed the point at all
And will sing the same old song

But let's not get too low down
There will be challenges for sure
The first will be to get..............
Me new wheel chair through the door!
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26-12-2014, 11:55 PM
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For Us old Sages

I must have reached the biblical score
When she walked through that sparkling door
She looked and smiled and I smiled back
It was then I knew I had been ‘hacked’

She asked me if we’d met before
And I fell hook, line, sinker on the floor
I offered her champagne on ice
With tears she said ‘ you’re very nice’

The room just vanished in a haze
I’d become a man half crazed – half crazed
We talked of places we’d both seen
Yet had never met through lovers screen

We lightly dined and talked so briefly
And then she said so very neatly
‘I think it’s time to talk some more
Perhaps behind a firm closed door?’

I gulped and thought this can’t be true
As we stepped in the ‘rising box’
She gently nuzzled up real close
And I could hear the ‘time bomb’ clock

To be contd...........!
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27-12-2014, 01:58 AM
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**** you Gumbud

Stop ****ing whining for Christ's sake
You are like a ghoul relishing a wake
Hang on to what you have left to grasp
If it stinks then grab that nasty wasp
And crush it so - start afresh with far open eyes
Enter that bright tunnel exhausted, relishing good-byes
Ready to embrace your unrequited cries - **** you
Unless others are so few

**** you Gumbud. You think you are the only one that has suffered in this poxy life?

Nice whiskey this.
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27-12-2014, 09:38 AM
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In the middle of life, death comes to take your measurements. The visit is forgotten and life goes on. But the suit is being sewn on the sly.

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27-12-2014, 10:55 AM
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MKJ, your character assassination on GUMBUD was totally unfounded & uncalled for.


IMO
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27-12-2014, 01:40 PM
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Your poems are music to my ears Gumbud, lovely work!

"Heed not the anger of youth for it soon passes" Anon.
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Originally Posted by Jem ->
Your poems are music to my ears Gumbud, lovely work!

"Heed not the anger of youth for it soon passes" Anon.
iI agree
 
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