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16-09-2018, 02:04 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

1
caution:
be warned at the outset
this poem is about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just terribly about nothing


about nothing this poem is;
that is, there is No Thing
no matter or anti-matter
in this verse that only grows
better and better
into zilch and zero
and so is most logically therefore
about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just terribly about nothing



2
and of course
the apologists and admirers
may seek some profundity
even in this Dada absurdity
but I must leave you
you ding-dongs
giving the kiss of life to dead earthworms
and so I leave you to
your eternal confound-ity




3
and the critics from the left
might pounce
and might utter
with much solemnity:
but aren’t all your poems
about nothing?


well, you zombies,
then this is certainly not the first
of my no-things
and neither have you seen the last;
thank you very much



and the critics from the right
might pounce
and might jeer
with indecent profanity:
but isn’t all poetry
about sweet nothings?


and my most prosaic answer is:
well, then you, liverless louts,
countless in life are rewarded for nothings
and you vote in leaders for nothing;
countless nations are run on nothing
and great businesses earn money on nothing;
why then, you one-eyed wimps,
and you weakling hypocrites
why then do you jeer at
poet-innocents who are content
to openly propagate nothing?




4
a reminder

this poem is about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just terribly about nothing




unnecessary repetition

for maximum irritation:
this poem is about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just shockingly about nothing




5
conclusion

still, this nothing-poem aspires
to the pages
of the Complete Works of Poet Nothing

Raj Arumugam
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16-09-2018, 02:10 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

Originally Posted by Sweetie pie ->
1
caution:
be warned at the outset
this poem is about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just terribly about nothing


about nothing this poem is;
that is, there is No Thing
no matter or anti-matter
in this verse that only grows
better and better
into zilch and zero
and so is most logically therefore
about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just terribly about nothing



2
and of course
the apologists and admirers
may seek some profundity
even in this Dada absurdity
but I must leave you
you ding-dongs
giving the kiss of life to dead earthworms
and so I leave you to
your eternal confound-ity




3
and the critics from the left
might pounce
and might utter
with much solemnity:
but aren’t all your poems
about nothing?


well, you zombies,
then this is certainly not the first
of my no-things
and neither have you seen the last;
thank you very much



and the critics from the right
might pounce
and might jeer
with indecent profanity:
but isn’t all poetry
about sweet nothings?


and my most prosaic answer is:
well, then you, liverless louts,
countless in life are rewarded for nothings
and you vote in leaders for nothing;
countless nations are run on nothing
and great businesses earn money on nothing;
why then, you one-eyed wimps,
and you weakling hypocrites
why then do you jeer at
poet-innocents who are content
to openly propagate nothing?




4
a reminder

this poem is about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just terribly about nothing




unnecessary repetition

for maximum irritation:
this poem is about nothing;
that is,
it is
about ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling
about bing-bong-bing-bong-bing;
just shockingly about nothing




5
conclusion

still, this nothing-poem aspires
to the pages
of the Complete Works of Poet Nothing

Raj Arumugam
wow I'm stunned and amazed and speechless - who the feck is arumugam - is he some sort of arigami expert?
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16-09-2018, 02:13 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

Originally Posted by gumbud ->
wow I'm stunned and amazed and speechless - who the feck is arumugam - is he some sort of arigami expert?
I thought you would like that.
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16-09-2018, 02:22 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

Originally Posted by Sweetie pie ->
I thought you would like that.
I do I do - I love all your works - ya an artist - isn't she lads - lads - lads - where are you all running to??
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16-09-2018, 02:33 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

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16-09-2018, 02:40 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

Originally Posted by Sweetie pie ->
ah the infamous flying geese of leisurely scribbles - always have a problem takin off but when they do - they fly in perfect formation!! we now have a goose among us!!
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16-09-2018, 02:41 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

Originally Posted by gumbud ->
ah the infamous flying geese of leisurely scribbles - always have a problem takin off but when they do - they fly in perfect formation!! we now have a goose among us!!
Cranes Gummy, they are Cranes. I thought you wanted origami.
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16-09-2018, 02:45 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

I need a bloody bourbon and cigar! - I'll use the origami to light it!! - well I don't think Lscribbles can afford cranes - trust SP to go expensive - are you paying for them ; housing them and feeding them? quack quack!!
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16-09-2018, 02:52 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

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16-09-2018, 02:55 PM
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Re: Leisurely Scribbles (part 5)

were did you get my photo from - that's classified!
 



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